Haiku- 118 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku- 118

Rating: 4.8


storm removed the top
my hut talks to heavens now
i am relived

Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 July 2021

A wonderful short write cleverly woven. Thought provoking.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 July 2021

The wrath of Mother Nature can alter everything.

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Abduhoo Salamath 31 August 2016

IT S NOT A FAULT OF STORM...IT S SYMBOL OF WEAKNESS OF YOUR TOP....GOOD HAIKU AND A LESSON.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2016

What an amazing haiku full of reality of humor this is really...Storm removes the top of hut and this talks to heaven....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 August 2016

With the power of nature! Nice work.

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