Haiku 12 Poem by David Wood

Haiku 12

Rating: 5.0


When man puts himself
Above God all his efforts
And plans come to nought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 24 June 2013

You are right Kevin an omission on my part.

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Kevin Halls 24 June 2013

Very true! Only complaint David is that Haiku is 17 syllables 5-7-5- or so I was told?

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R.j. Wynn 24 June 2013

Awesome speech we want more

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Dave Walker 24 June 2013

So so true. Fantastic poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2013

Man must realize his role to bring peace. Thoughtful haiku.

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Kevin Halls 25 June 2013

Found out that Japanese Haiku is 5-7-5- but some poets decided to go against it, and now it's any way you want! But I reckon 5-7-5- is better?

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Paul Brookes 25 June 2013

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

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Paul Brookes 25 June 2013

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

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Paul Brookes 25 June 2013

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

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Heather Wilkins 24 June 2013

it still is a lovely thought. God is always first

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