When man puts himself
Above God all his efforts
And plans come to nought.
Very true! Only complaint David is that Haiku is 17 syllables 5-7-5- or so I was told?
Man must realize his role to bring peace. Thoughtful haiku.
Found out that Japanese Haiku is 5-7-5- but some poets decided to go against it, and now it's any way you want! But I reckon 5-7-5- is better?
10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD
10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD
10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are right Kevin an omission on my part.