M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku - 28 Boat - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

the sound of water
flowing continuously
a little boat sails

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Haiku

Comments about Haiku - 28 Boat by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/15/2015 1:40:00 AM)

    gently over the waves we go
    thanks Asim
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  • Seema Jayaraman (11/15/2015 1:02:00 AM)

    lovely haiku.. the boat I can feel myself on the boat.. thanks (Report) Reply

  • Life Sparkles (11/14/2015 11:42:00 PM)

    the sound of a leak
    sharks will like the taste of me
    I prefer land mate
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/14/2015 11:11:00 PM)

    Beautiful! That is a true haiku! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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