Haiku 3 Poem by Souren Mondal

Envision! Thanks for sharing.

On target, Nicely written haiku...I liked it.

Your haiku succeeds, and puts the reader right at the water's edge. The gentle ripples in the surface distort the bird's colorful bill... You did all this with just a handful of syllables. Looking at himself- -because he too will be food for something, one day. Or is he just that beautiful? Your haiku makes us wonder. Excellent. I'm glad I got to see it. I have a special place in my heart for Great Blue herons, after having had to wade into my pond to save one from a snapping turtle, six years ago. I held them both in my hands at once, for a brief moment. If you'd like to read about it, I'll email you the details- - wrote it all down a few hours later, after a long hot shower. Great Haiku, Souren.

Through this little words, its enough to picture big to my brain..what a good choice of words u pick :)

It is rare that an initial inspiration hits the syllable count exactly. But, with only a few to express the thought, manipulation can be difficult. I have often spent hours on a haiku for just such reasons. This one evokes exactly what your intent was. I don't know if it is correct to title a haiku, but I always do because the wording can often mislead. Until I read your notes, I wasn't sure what this was about. Then, it came together for me and my appreciation for the work grew exponentially