M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Haiku - 9 Patience - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The Crane on one leg
Patiently waiting for fish
Strategy is made

Topic(s) of this poem: patience

Form: Haiku

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This haiku is inspired by watching a crane bird. Have you ever notices a crane bird standing motionless on one leg for eight or nine hours at a stretch to catch the fish?
Cranes can sit and wait for a fish to show its face for hours and hours in one spot one can learn the lesson of patience from this beautiful bird.

Comments about Haiku - 9 Patience by M. Asim Nehal

  • (7/27/2016 6:38:00 AM)

    Wow great management lesson from crane. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/16/2015 1:58:00 PM)

    Patience is the key about life; with the muse of hope. Nice piece. (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2015 10:06:00 AM)

    I agree with Ms. Sanjukta's comments, Last line took it all to a different level. Another fine Haiku. Keep writing, Stay blessed. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/13/2015 10:59:00 AM)

    Awesome use of symbolism. And the last line is very immpressive.10++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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