Haiku - Aching Poem by Asif Baloch

Haiku - Aching

Rating: 3.5


Aching with a deep pain
inside my lonely heart
only my heart knows the
taste of my tears dropped

Saturday, June 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,heart,lonely,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rifhan Rasuli 19 September 2008

Um, pardon me for asking, sir. Isn't a haiku supposed to be written in three lines? Regardless, all your haiku poems are well-written.

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