I Wail With Silent Cry Poem by Asif Baloch

I Wail With Silent Cry

Rating: 4.7


I was born as a useless being
Sent in the myth of painful scene
Chain of venomous thorns put on me
Each moment when it ties
I wail with a silent cry

I write with trembling hands
I try but could not stand
I weep with no tears left to shed
Soul is haunted by lonely thoughts
I wail with a silent cry

My eyes open wide but still in dreams
My lips are sealed but I hear painful screams
My heart, alas my poor heart
Sings a sad song of love to be
Standing alone and no one by my side
I wail with a silent cry

Sunday, October 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: haunted
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ershad Mazumder 16 October 2008

Thanks for this piece. Drop first line and make it more poetic.You have poetic talent.Read and edit your postings repeatedly.

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Asif Andalib 16 October 2008

I like your poems a lot. This one portrays the pain and hope during loneliness in a splendid way.10 for this piece.

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Emo Seb 15 October 2008

this is beautiful and deep. great write.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 15 October 2008

very very heartrending aijaz...really nice it feels as i with every piece you get more and more refined in your art...well done.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 October 2008

a write on sad feelings...good emotions there...poem expressive 10

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Standing alone and no one by my side- a moment made invincible and timeless

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Dr Kamran Haider 22 October 2008

Beautiful portryal of painful moemnts and tormented emotions... A great piece indeed... Keep it up Asif... Regards, Kamran

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

A amusing poem that touches heart. Especially, the last four lines are wonderful. Love it.10 added.

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A wonderful poem. U get 10++

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Joe Breunig 17 October 2008

An enjoyable piece; I will e-mail you some private suggestions on how to possibly increase the strength of this poem. -Joe

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