Haiku-An Attempt. Poem by Geoffrey Fafard

Haiku-An Attempt.

Rating: 4.5


A mind problem now
Not knowing not coping well
Lost without intent

First morning sunlight
Through my window softly smiling
aware not of day

Repairs to the heart
By both surgeon and lover
Skills needed by both

Pale yellow dogs crawl
Ready for the fiercest brawl
Fleas don their armour

Saturday, May 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Maybe not for this would be pretend poet.....hey but fun having a shot.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 May 2017

First morning sunlight has poured joy in mind and first problem of mind along with others have gone way. Wonderful series of Haikus shared here.10

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Geoffrey Fafard 13 May 2017

Kumarmani my friend.Thank you indeed for your comments and observations.They are much appreciated. Geoffrey.

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