Haiku I- The Samurai Poem by the poet

Haiku I- The Samurai

Rating: 4.1


Wielding his blood sword,
A hero who fights with pride,
And slays with honor.

He is a brave soul,
Drawing blood only for peace,
Never for vengeance.

Even if he falls,
In the midst of a battle,
His name will stay on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raveendran . 04 July 2007

The form is very attractive, as for the content, peace stays back when there is conflict.

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Gold Flower 27 June 2007

Short. Powerful. Rich. Amazing. Beautiful. All the words that describe your haiku. God Bless All Poets. *Lilly*

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Goldy Locks 13 June 2007

Loves it. Powerful, glorious, victorious.. .. sjg //ps Last Samurai. Owns it.

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2007

The splendor of The Samurai, beautifully and skillfully displayed. You are a fine wordsmith, Alex. I wish you well. As always, Sandra

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Rachael Rewonxda 30 May 2007

Great work. I really enjoyed it.10! Leah

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