Ken e Hall

Haiku...That Sinking Feeling Jealousy...Edit

Shipwrecks Filled with young
Lovers broken hearts always
Sank in Jealous Seas
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013
Poem Edited: Saturday, August 17, 2013

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  • Geetha JayakumarGeetha Jayakumar (8/28/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Wow. Wonderful Haiku..Jealousy leaves no place for love...

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  • Yasmin KhanYasmin Khan (8/11/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    Brief and metaphorical, jealousy like a sea rages raves to drown Love.

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (7/28/2013 3:15:00 AM)

    brilliant write sir full of wisdom
    regards

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (7/27/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    nice haiku Ken jealousy has no place with love.

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  • David WoodDavid Wood (7/23/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    Nice one Ken, I invite you to read my haiku's when you have time.

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  • Ken E Hall (7/18/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    & Lyda & (16/7/2013)
    This is so true to the jealous feeling. Oh dear I am human he ha he. Nice Haiku... :) Thanks for sharing!

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  • Ken E Hall (7/18/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    Lorraine Colon(7/17/2013 4: 28: 00 PM)
    So clever. I enjoyed this very much.

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