Happy & Lonely Poem by sanitra porter

Happy & Lonely



when you held me at nite i became happy. when you kissed me on my lips i became glad.
when you step out the door i became lonely. when you left and didnt return i became sad.
when you hit me in my face i became shocked cause you never did anything like it.
when you left me for one of your h*** i became mad and fierce. now that your gone im lonely all over again

Thursday, October 6, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: happy,lips,lonely,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 09 October 2011

Honest ink, you have sweet heart to proud but to be sad is not allowed...haha i wish you keep on doing, inking paper with these words..this is nice poem so, write the next poems okay? _Unwritten Soul

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Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

Song of despair... Well written... Those who are lonley because of love really feel the pain of love... Good one!

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Claudia Krizay 03 February 2012

sad but very powerful and honest- good one!

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hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

very nice poem.. but you know, you should be happy you are no longer with such a person...you deserve much better :)

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Wendee Isaacs 27 October 2011

nice poem....really touched my heart

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Claudia Krizay 27 October 2011

A poem filled with truth and emotion- beautifully done!

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Crimson Love 13 October 2011

were all alone when it comes to love, perhaps its ones fate, but perhaps its for the best, beautiful poem.

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