Happy Vs Sad Poem by Vidya Murali

Happy Vs Sad

Rating: 4.9

Noisy days were fun
Ever felt sad for none!
Like a dancing flower in the lawn
My days were happy and warm!
I flowed like a waterfall
I was happy in all!
I raised like the fountains
I just lived the moments!

The quiet days mourn
Like the mountains frown!
My thought is of pain
As I fought with the rain!
Quiet is my day's fight
So quiet is the terrible night!
I missed those noisy bestowments
I just exist for that moment!

Wednesday, May 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: happy,old,old age ,oldness,sad
Mahtab Bangalee 13 May 2020

wonderful expression on Happy Vs Sad...superb comparison

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 May 2020

Such a nice poem, Vidya M. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Kumari 21 May 2020

Very nice poem ma’am

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Vidya Murali 22 May 2020

Thanks a lot for your comments ma’am.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 May 2020

As one grows old a feeling of loneliness grips the mind. Very nicely crafted. As the zeal of youth gradually wanes one feels the loneliness. Thanks for shring.

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Vidya Murali 19 May 2020

Truly said sir... Thank you for your precious comments

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Varsha M 18 May 2020

Transition from productive one to another world of dependence is always sad and we always miss what we have lived. Well penned emotions.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 May 2020

EXCEPTIONALLY cool let not others only praise to fool read poets those you wish to let off others in to a fathomless pool

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Chinedu Dike 15 May 2020

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Vidya.

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