Brian Mayo

Gold Star - 12,347 Points (1960)

Harbor's Mist? - Poem by Brian Mayo

Harbors missed and havens passed
Tense the fist and bend the mast
Dreams dismissed of oceans vast
Gently kissed; alive, at last!

Topic(s) of this poem: love, ocean, ships

Form: Verse

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Harbor's mist and havens past?

Comments about Harbor's Mist? by Brian Mayo

  • Wes Vogler (11/27/2015 2:42:00 AM)

    Dreams dismissed of oceans vast This could be the beginning of quite a tale. Have you read The Robinson Crusoe Story yet by Carryl? If not I envy you A treat in store O the night was thick and hazy.....
    This little POEM(yours) i liked.
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  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/17/2015 11:55:00 AM)

    ❤️ this Brian! ! Positively optimistic, uplifting, romantic (both senses of the word) , hopeful. Love the imagery and the metaphor. Ohm! :) (Report) Reply

    Brian Mayo (11/17/2015 9:54:00 PM)

    What's 'Ohm? '

  • Pithy Marvel (11/17/2015 11:43:00 AM)

    harbors mist
    or a whale on
    its back
    that just pissed?

    Great flow you have
    don't mind my madness!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015

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