Morn sky caked with smog
Sun concealed in misty lair
Foggy thoughts in mind.
Landscape draped with snow
Rose petals stripped of beauty
Chilly thoughts rain hard.
very original and fresh poem! keep writing! could you read my haiku-style poems too? Thank you.
you wrote so less but spoke so much. i loved this poem. you said alot without even having to write much. a 10 for you! great job
The readers is getting the original essence of haiku. Please read my poems if possible. Thanks a lot. Tapas Baidya, Kolaghat, Purba Medinipur, W.B., India.
That sounds so pleasant! Why then is harsh in the title?
i personnaly believ that its very difficult to write a haiku well depicted beauty of wnter morning 10
lovely- you have captured well the grim harsh winter inner and outer landscape.10
It is small world An indian lady writing japanesse forms in english and makinga fine job of it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent haiku string