Harsh Winter(Haiku) Poem by koyel mitra

Harsh Winter(Haiku)

Rating: 4.8


Morn sky caked with smog
Sun concealed in misty lair
Foggy thoughts in mind.

Landscape draped with snow
Rose petals stripped of beauty
Chilly thoughts rain hard.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivor Hogg 11 September 2008

Excellent haiku string

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 11 September 2008

very original and fresh poem! keep writing! could you read my haiku-style poems too? Thank you.

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Tom Balch 12 September 2008

Nicely done in few 10/10 regards Tom

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Shilesha Johnson 12 September 2008

you wrote so less but spoke so much. i loved this poem. you said alot without even having to write much. a 10 for you! great job

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Tapas Baidya 15 September 2008

The readers is getting the original essence of haiku. Please read my poems if possible. Thanks a lot. Tapas Baidya, Kolaghat, Purba Medinipur, W.B., India.

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<font color=black>Nagourta 13 November 2008

That sounds so pleasant! Why then is harsh in the title?

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Rakhi Jayashankar 04 October 2008

i personnaly believ that its very difficult to write a haiku well depicted beauty of wnter morning 10

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Mamta Agarwal 30 September 2008

lovely- you have captured well the grim harsh winter inner and outer landscape.10

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2008

.........................good show, young lady!

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Ivor Hogg 26 September 2008

It is small world An indian lady writing japanesse forms in english and makinga fine job of it

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