Has The Donkey Finally Caught Up With The Carrot Poem by Shaun Cronick

Has The Donkey Finally Caught Up With The Carrot

Rating: 5.0


Has the donkey finally caught up with the carrot,
That powers PoemHunter.
For I'm waiting like a lemon to access a poem,
And it is taking a lifetime to load.
And while waiting an eternity and more,
I can hear a distant church bell,
And the wind blows tumbleweeds across my path.

Monday, August 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 21 August 2020

What a funny way of describing the inner workings of a large website. Something must be powering this lumbering tub of the Internet sea. To those of us who are ignorant of web design, it might as well be a donkey of mythic proportions chasing a carrot. A 10 for both of your wits!

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Dominic Windram 11 August 2020

Very witty poem Shaun and one which I can certainly relate to...simply.brilliant closing lines..made me laugh a lot! It's definitely a rib tickling ten from me!

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