Have You Ever-1 Poem by Asif Baloch

Have You Ever-1

Rating: 5.0


Have you ever felt
Lost and alone
With people all around
And known as none
Smiling with sadness
In your eyes
Weeping blood tears
Drops inside
Echoing music puts lashes
On your soul
Tearing away all your
Last hopes
Giggles and laughs doth
Wants you to die
Forcing you to look in
Death angel eyes

Have you ever felt
Destroyed
Hoping for hope to stand
One last time
Yearning for love and to
Smile
Feeling like divested
Bier
Untouchable, unwanted
Forbidden
Left in the desert for
Vultures and stink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annie Girl 16 November 2008

yes to all..... haha very good work

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 November 2008

Weeping blood tears Drops inside Echoing music puts lashes On your soul Tearing away all your Last hopes wonderful imagery as i am aloneand lonely , love seemingly shadowed soul yet swells by new hope...........superb wtrite. acroos passion of tears,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Sunand Sharma 16 November 2008

Wonderful creation, a very nice thought! ! ! keep up the good work :)

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Dr Kamran Haider 16 November 2008

Wow... Bro... I simply loved it... It provokes thoughts, beautfiul content dealt with masterful simplicity and a I am having a great feeling after reading this poem... Thanks for sharing...

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Mohammed Albalushi 16 November 2008

interesting poem, touch the feeling, wish u all the best

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

that descibes me a lot.. but only inside if people would see that they would wanna run and hide like I do. this brought back memories of something that changed me. It hurt to read this... very good job. Becca

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Gargi Saha 26 November 2008

Personal feelings have been tried to universalise. Awesome write............

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Estevan Martin 18 November 2008

I can actually relate to this one... This shows great emotion..

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Emo Seb 18 November 2008

awesome. full of emotion. keep it up.

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A very strong powerful poem with amazing imagery. Thanking yu for allowing me to read it. Karin Anderson

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