M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

He Came With My Spirit. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I am the spirit that roams round the earth
singing with the rives the songs of love
enchanting the memory of ancient glory
like the spiders crafting web-cow and
like a mermaid with long tail flashing the water.

One day I went to visit a friend very dignified
Who lived a life of a king-size
Now capsized within four walls
Lying on bed and waiting for the call
I touched his forehead with the ends my fingers
as if I was trying to remind something we enjoyed.

He felt my presence as if I am somewhere around
And with delight he started to tell stories of the past
like a poet who takes pleasure in reciting his best poem.
An hour full of old memories passed,
like the shadows of the trees over the grass.
Finally when I was about to leave
His spirit came out of mortal body to follow with me.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death

Form: Free Verse


Comments about He Came With My Spirit. by M. Asim Nehal

  • (9/16/2015 3:15:00 PM)


    excellent poem Mohammed, the final line was a true surprise I had not expected, great writing my friend :) (Report) Reply

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  • (9/16/2015 11:50:00 AM)


    Spiritual poem, It appeared as if your friend was waiting for you to take him along.......Wonderful story of friendship with great imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/16/2015 10:44:00 AM)


    Oh... it made me speechless. Nothing to say. Keep writing marvellous pieces like this.100 (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/16/2015 5:37:00 AM)


    Somewher around with the muse of life and love. Nice piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015



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