He Came With My Spirit. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

He Came With My Spirit.

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I am the spirit that roams round the earth
singing with the rives the songs of love
enchanting the memory of ancient glory
like the spiders crafting web-cow and
like a mermaid with long tail flashing the water.

One day I went to visit a friend very dignified
Who lived a life of a king-size
Now capsized within four walls
Lying on bed and waiting for the call
I touched his forehead with the ends my fingers
as if I was trying to remind something we enjoyed.

He felt my presence as if I am somewhere around
And with delight he started to tell stories of the past
like a poet who takes pleasure in reciting his best poem.
An hour full of old memories passed,
like the shadows of the trees over the grass.
Finally when I was about to leave
His spirit came out of mortal body to follow with me.

Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 04 January 2019

Excellent write with philosophical undertone.

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Richard Beevor 16 September 2015

excellent poem Mohammed, the final line was a true surprise I had not expected, great writing my friend :)

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T Rajan Evol 16 September 2015

Spiritual poem, It appeared as if your friend was waiting for you to take him along.......Wonderful story of friendship with great imagery.

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much Evol Sir

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Sanjukta Nag 16 September 2015

Oh... it made me speechless. Nothing to say. Keep writing marvellous pieces like this.100

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2015

Somewher around with the muse of life and love. Nice piece.

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