Whatso one wishes from whatso shore,
Whatso goal, if prayed from deepest pore,
Pursued reverting not,
Dotting each single dot,
He that strives sure would get— he so sure.
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Words well said | 41.11.14 |
Core, shore, more! From the deepest pore. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
No, I think sharing comes easy here, the key is in reading, so thanks indeed.
reading your poetry is like licking fingers even after the honey in one's mouth lingers Yes you said my comments are longer but some one has to compensate for the weaker s
No, it is no weakness I like it. Like it because I am very laconic in words both writing and speaking. And sometimes the silence becomes unbearable and I need a person like you, so welcome, PP
He that strives sure would get— he so sure. ___....Oh, yes, so sure. If one wish something from his deepest core, and work hard for it, the destiny helps him to triumph. Brilliant work sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fortune favors the brave is the great embodied message in this witty Limerick sir! A significant short work....10
You have a point too, but the point here is: if your wish comes from deep, if you are prepared to pursue to the hilt, the cosmic will contrives to make your wish come true. Thanks for your rating Dr Swain