He Who Dares. Poem by Fay Slimm

He Who Dares.

Rating: 5.0


Hushed and hydrated,
Water-wet otters,
Timorous creatures,
Dissension dislike.

Hostile approaches,
Raising reactions.
Daring offensives
Unnerving the pike.

Opposing behaviour
Self-will underpins.
Courage in warfare
Means he who dares
....................... wins!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 02 November 2009

Fay, really like the way you composed this. Excellent piece of poetry.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Catrina Heart 02 November 2009

he who dares wins...like no pain no glory is it! ! ! Loved your poem........

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 November 2009

Your a fine writer Fay, smiles timid heart they say.. :) Andy 10

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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

Intersting and fine poem..10

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David Harris 02 November 2009

Fay, I liked this, especially the last stanza. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Tsira Goge 02 November 2009

Opposing behaviour Self-will underpins. Courage in warfare Means he who dares ....................... wins! Strong words, it is remarkable. 10............. Thank you Fay... Tsira

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Daniel Kempson 02 November 2009

Top notch poem Fay, love otters such cheeky chappies 10 Daniel

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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