Headlights (Zhu Zhu) Poem by Denis Mair

Headlights (Zhu Zhu)

Rating: 5.0


by Zhu Zhu
(translated by Denis Mair)

Returning late one night
Headlight beams ahead
Measure the land like a ruler.
My car's spinning tires
Face the hugeness of that black backdrop.
The ruler is short, needs to take it in sections,
Which makes me like a tailor
Taking note of places I pass.
On the parts already measured, darkness falls anew
Smoothing out imprints of hand and ruler.
A perfect tailor keeps the sections in mind
An imperfect tailor's mind gets scrambled,
Needs to go over the same ground,
And I am the imperfect one, just an apprentice
Scolded for failing to get the simplest things right;
At least my clumsiness attempts something genuine.

Thursday, September 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,progress,uncertainty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Zhu Zhu is an art critic who was born in Yangzhou. He has written essays on many important modern artists including Yue Minjun, Liu Ye, Yin Chaoyang and Fang Lijun. He now lives in Beijing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 18 September 2018

His TRUE ORIENTAL POLITE INSIGHT of a Chinese Poet, I cite Zhu Zhu's last SIX lines: A perfect tailor keeps the sections in mind, An imperfect tailor's mind gets scrambled, Needs to go over the same ground, And I am the imperfect one, just an apprentice, Scolded for failing to get the simplest things right; At least my clumsiness attempts something genuine. Marvelous! BOTH the translation and the poem.10++++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 September 2018

A touching poem, fascinatingly rendered and a true oriental polite insight by Zhu Zhu, a fantastic chinese poet. Due to your excellent translation and words, Denis, I can enjoy this amazing poet and his dashing poems. Thankfully yours from the deepest of my being, GBU in Abundance. A 10++++++++++ for the voting/rating.

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Susan Williams 14 September 2018

Thank you so much for giving us access to poems by Zhu Zhu and others, you give us depth and breadth to our poetic experience. Thank you from all of us literature lovers! ! !

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