Heartless Poem by Broken heart emo

Heartless

Rating: 3.6


Why did you hurt so much?
Why did you hurt so much?

How could you be so heartless?
While she is always cleaning up your mess

She wasnt afraid of anything except from losing you
And all the pain you had put her through

Never the less, she kept loving you more and more
And her love was so pure

She was both beautiful and smart
But you left her with a broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkness Everywhere 16 July 2009

really good poem keep it up 10++

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Mary Joy Lumanog 18 July 2009

its a \nice poem indeed! lack of appreciation in one's love for another..despite everything that she has done...that's too bad isn't it...so sad

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loved it... awesum poem...but must hav worked over it a lil more... extend it....

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Amitava Sur 07 July 2014

what a poignant moving poem this one is! ! So nicely expressed the rejections in love what really pains me... very nice in deed.

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Sonali Sings 10 December 2011

It's a mere poem..sometimes what we suffer for others cannot be brought back..a curse follows us forever, so one should make things clear and not put others in doubts..yeah, certain tragedies do provide good material for a better and nice poem. Wishes always!

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Urshula Davis 11 July 2011

Nice poem! It's like you're crying out it's very honest and real! I can respect that!

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Ales Macguire 08 June 2010

nice and very moving

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Lucia Domingos Fula 25 May 2010

i love this poem! i love the way you express the way you feel.

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