Hearts Poem by shirin sheikhi

That was a well written poem good write

meanwhile nowadays earth is almost in the dark even with this apparent light well written and done in a perfect poetic and melodic way..rich in idea and enough meaningful.. liked the way you wrote..lovely poem and let me say well done..10+++++++

A lovely beginning floowed by the mention of darkness...and really personifying the general mood of the world...so unique in that all cultures seem to agree yet for some reason can not unite in simply living this really brief life out in complete peace and joy...your love of nature also apparent, , , , ,

Yet comes the time When a secluded poet Tears out his aglowing heart For all to show it And it becomes flashlight In darkness chart. Once lit it won’t fade Until new stars facilitate To find escape from Night. 10+

dear shirin, i do share your anxiety.....

earth is almost in the dark even with this apparent light... a realization that almost all poets make you have written down Shirin thank you

nice message! i like it! ! dramatically well-written!

'apparent light '______very symbolic. Real poetic.Thanks.++10.

beautiful write.wordplay and flow is nice.liked it.

but at every single moment of time earth seems illuminated by some spectacular hearts liked these lines dear Shirin.... you are poetic. lot of good ideas in ur poem. thank you for sharing.