Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Heaven - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

A huge gate that never opened
Still no rust, no dust, upon its
Iron grills of angelic figures.

Standing patiently infront of it
I shouted everyday my name,
For their identity was unknown
To this worldly ignorant soul.

Then one day a reply floated out,
“Make your heart kind like wind
And no bar will resist you to enter.”

Topic(s) of this poem: heaven

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Heaven by Sanjukta Nag

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/26/2015 3:05:00 AM)


    We should all aim towards heaven! With the muse of moral works. Nice piece. (Report) Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (9/26/2015 2:49:00 AM)


    this poem - an invite for travelling! and you give hope for a happy end! (Report) Reply

  • Sranisha Francis (9/25/2015 1:21:00 AM)


    beautiful words............

    Standing patiently infront of it
    I shouted everyday my name, Yes I add to it: Oh, Lord I am here, here my cry......................
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/24/2015 6:48:00 PM)


    Outstanding, brilliant and very innovative...................100 on 10...........comparison is par excellence.
    “Make your heart kind like wind
    And no bar will resist you to enter.”
    (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (9/24/2015 9:18:00 AM)


    True and honest soul always finds the path to the Heaven.Very nice. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 24, 2015


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