Heaven Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Heaven

Rating: 5.0


A huge gate that never opened
Still no rust, no dust, upon its
Iron grills of angelic figures.

Standing patiently infront of it
I shouted everyday my name,
For their identity was unknown
To this worldly ignorant soul.

Then one day a reply floated out,
“Make your heart kind like wind
And no bar will resist you to enter.”

Thursday, September 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 September 2015

We should all aim towards heaven! With the muse of moral works. Nice piece.

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Liza Sudina 26 September 2015

this poem - an invite for travelling! and you give hope for a happy end!

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Sranisha Francis 25 September 2015

beautiful words............ Standing patiently infront of it I shouted everyday my name, Yes I add to it: Oh, Lord I am here, here my cry......................

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M Asim Nehal 24 September 2015

Outstanding, brilliant and very innovative...................100 on 10...........comparison is par excellence. “Make your heart kind like wind And no bar will resist you to enter.”

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 September 2015

True and honest soul always finds the path to the Heaven.Very nice.

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