Heaven Poem by Archita Kumar

Heaven

Rating: 5.0


Knock! ! knock! ! Mommy
I am your little baby mommy
Mommy! ! Where do you stay? ?
In your dad's heart baby
Mommy! ! Mommy! ! And me? ?
In my heart my dear.
Knock! ! Knock! ! Mommy
What do you eat? ?
Vegetables and fruits
Andme mommy? ?
The same I eat
Knock! ! Knock! ! Mommy
Whom do you love
Your dadmy dear
And me mommy
Lot more than else my love
Knock! ! Knock! ! Mommy
You told me you live in dad's heart
But where is that heartand where it has come from
My love; it has come from heaven
Where is heaven mommy? ?
It is far far away
Where God lives
But mommy where God lives
My love; In heaven
Mommy where Ilive
In God ‘s place my love
Mommy;In heaven mommy
Yes my dear
Mommy! ! Mommywhen Iwill be with you
Very soon; my love
Mommy! ! Mommy! !
Yes my love
Mommy! !Why do you love me? ?
Because you are my child my love
Heeee heee... She smiles
Mommy! ! Mommy
Yes my love
You love me becauseI am your child
Yes my love
But I thought mommy you love me
Because Iama part of you soul
No my child, you are my everything
Mommy! ! Mommy! ! Don't be sad
I love you mommy! !
You are my whole world mommy
But mommy; Do you love me as I do? ?
A deep silence
Tears ofquestions flowsfrom eyes
Again A deep silence says the rest.

Sunday, June 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: mother,mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 10 June 2019

Very strong poetic themes: Mommy and Heaven.

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Archita Kumar 13 June 2019

I am very thankful

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Archita Kumar 13 June 2019

Thankfull to you

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 June 2019

I comment ONLY when I want to help Your poem is very good if only you can Edit it I am an International poet adviser OF ONLY ENGLISH POETRY 'If you can only reduce repetition and some detailed edit like why all caps etc then this poetry can be one of your tops.. rest ur a good poetess and judge I got kicked for 6 six years now i am First

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Archita kumar 09 June 2019

Mr poet poet the whole poem is not in caps and the words are highlighted with bold for the key words of the poem. And I have give repititions for the poems to sound beautiful.And many poets have used repititions in their poems.like Rabindranath tagore has many poems with repititions.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 April 2020

I love this sweet child myself.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2019

" I love you mommy! ! " Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 23 June 2019

Most beautiful poem it is.so nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poetic thoughts.100++++++++

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Kim Barney 22 June 2019

An interesting was to tell a story. I enjoyed reading this.

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C F 21 June 2019

A very unusual and unique way to portray the questioning voice of an innocent child... very effective. Very well written.10+

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