I'm dizzy
But I gotta get busy.
On a roll
Brain's running to'n'fro.
Head's spinning
Like a Top.
But Heaven Knows
I just can't stop.
(June 17th 2016)
please please don't stop heaven knows Love it loved still going to love it its too inspiring. Like a spring stepped i'm going to eject, i'm going to jump powerful work keep writing
Let's hope that doesnt happen to you again Jenny, when you feel stressed again, come here to Poem Hunter, we will help ease your stress. :)
Brain's running to'n'fro. such a powerful expression conveying all that is happening in the brain, in the mind, in the body........very good poem full of ideas......... tony
Oh my, I appreciate your candidly positive comments! ! Thanks a million, Dr. Brahmin, for my perfect rating! ! I look forward to reading your work and hearing more from you! Jen
You helped people to understand what it feels if they on your shoes...a nice poem, i like the smooth flow :)
Wow, thanks Soul! ! That was certainly my intention, plus to reach those who could relate. Thanks for your kind comments! ! ; -0
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good one. Take care.