Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,242 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Heavenly Nest - Poem by Amitava Sur

One day I arrived on this earth
From a land of light and peace,
Filled with love and affection
With a heavenly fragrance.

A gorgeous cushion was there for me
Where I only slept,
So soft, feathery and furry it was
Moreover, was with full of warmth.

I was being nourished and attended
So carefully all through
No one was allowed to disturb me at all.

In a heaven I did live before arriving
On this earth.

It was my mother’s womb
The heavenly nest or a cocoon,
A land of light and peace
With heavenly fragrance.

Mother my loving mother
Who gave me the comfort at it’s best.
You carried and nurtured me
From a seed to a human being! !

Once at least I saw the heaven
A land of light and peace.
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Amitava (3.4.2015) 6-30 am


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Topic(s) of this poem: mother


Comments about Heavenly Nest by Amitava Sur

  • Ramesh Rai (4/10/2015 6:54:00 AM)


    A great imagery write expressing heavenly peace in the womb where the seed is nourished with mothers blood. The womb of a mother is a heavenly nest and protected by all efforts of mother. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/6/2015 3:45:00 PM)


    Mother my loving mother
    Who gave me the comfort at it’s best.
    You carried and nurtured me
    From a seed to a human being! ! .......Really mother is loving, great and is the best for nurturer. Highly envisioned. Nicely presented. Many thanks.........10
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (4/6/2015 5:43:00 AM)


    The poem is a great tribute to mother and that compassion which THE ALMIGHTY LORD has bestowed to us through mother. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (4/5/2015 12:47:00 PM)


    Amitava, you have captured the essence of heaven. Truly it is in the mother's womb beautiful writing (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (4/5/2015 2:03:00 PM)

    Thank you for liking the poem

  • (4/5/2015 1:09:00 AM)


    Amitava, an absolutely amazing poem, remembering the peace of a mother's womb, where you were safe, warm and completely at peace. Great imagery, showing us the light and peace of heaven. A precious and sensitive poem, it made me feel a gentle happiness while reading it. Great one, Amitava! ! 10 - 10's if possible! Thank you for an exquisite poem. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (4/5/2015 2:04:00 PM)

    Thanks for appreciating the poem.

  • Amitava Sur (4/5/2015 12:58:00 AM)


    Thank you all respected poets for liking the poem (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (4/5/2015 12:57:00 AM)


    Thank you Mr. Tushar and Akhtar vai for appreciating the content. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/4/2015 4:51:00 PM)


    The comfortable rest in the heavenly nest before birth is beautifully remembered. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/4/2015 12:22:00 PM)


    It was my mother’s womb
    The heavenly nest or a cocoon,
    A land of light and peace
    With heavenly fragrance.........Really the womb of mother is a land of peace. Nicely and aptly presented. Wonderful imagery. many thanks..........10/10
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  • (4/4/2015 1:06:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem............................... (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (4/3/2015 11:07:00 PM)


    Amitava, it's amazing, it's wonderful.......................10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2015 9:36:00 AM)


    The love and dedication for the new born, the motherly touch.....
    It was my mother’s womb
    The heavenly nest or a cocoon,
    A land of light and peace
    With heavenly fragrance.
    (Report) Reply

  • Tushar Ray (4/2/2015 11:11:00 PM)


    Mother's womb will indeed be an extension of heaven if we can recollect. Beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 4, 2015


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