Heavens, What A Surprise! Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Heavens, What A Surprise!

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What a man espies,
What in his dreams lies—
Called a paradise,
Right here on earth lies,
To earn which he dies!
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Haiku | 14.10.15 |

Friday, May 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven,paradise
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To my surprise,
To go to paradise
Man dies.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 11 May 2019

It is a haiku when I look at the notes area! It's a wonderful write!

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 May 2019

Date & Time: 5/10/2019 11: 04: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 55285171 - Heavens, What A Surprise! Member: Kevin Patrick Comment: As I read this, I have just found out that another poet possibly passed away, this poem is heartening to read, perhaps their is now a paradise to live. Thank you Aniruddha, perhaps their is an undiscovered country close by. - - Thanks for reading and liking the poem. But am not quite sure I've understood fully what you said.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 May 2019

A beautiful poem sir though deviated from the form Haiku! ! Thanks for sharing......10

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Kevin Patrick 10 May 2019

As I read this, I have just found out that another poet possibly passed away, this poem is heartening to read, perhaps their is now a paradise to live. Thank you Aniruddha, perhaps their is an undiscovered country close by.

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