Helping Ph - -As They Sleep Poem by me poet yeps poet

Helping Ph - -As They Sleep

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I am still hoping
while others are
throughout night hopping

I am simply hoping
as per advice given by thee
I wont' comment
on this one
you have already won
DIVINELY

as you know
snowfall has been replaced
by night falls
autumn fell long ago

now aged men
instead of younger men
fall
lol

poet you are the
POLE STAR
a real star
by far

we all
others will fall
now take your call

Saturday, December 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: christmas,nature,poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All except PH Know
no comments are getting posted
nor do we get emails

So I am helping em
read my comments
toa much greater poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 22 December 2020

we all others will fall now take your call through the every pore of time the last stage of life will come it's Christmas the last month of a year coming to start another new one...... but, the last stage of life comes not to start new one but to give place for others

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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2020

It definitely appears that PH is asleep at the wheel!

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Varsha M 19 December 2020

poet you are the POLE STAR a real star by far...... beautiful comparison.

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Varsha M 19 December 2020

So generous service. I am simply hoping as per advice given by thee I wont' comment on this one you have already won DIVINELY....soo generous one thank-you. Great admirations.

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Varsha M 19 December 2020

So generous service. I am simply hoping as per advice given by thee I wont' comment on this one you have already won DIVINELY....soo generous one thank-you.

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