Her Golden Veil Poem by Red O'Mara

Her Golden Veil

Rating: 4.0


She moves to kiss me from above,
her body over mine,
moves to brush back her hair,
to keep it from my face when,
stopping her hand,
I draw her closer and,
nearing me, her hair
falls around my head.
A curtain, golden, for us,
just her and me,
intensifying intimacy,
and concealing us,
just her and me,
in a golden dusk
that, as it closes,
disregards all the world,
but her and me.
Her face,
her lips,
her breath,
her mouth.
And me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just Maggie and me. Again.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 17 July 2015

And again....after these years....I say...this is such beautiful writing.

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Stevie Taite 25 November 2012

Wow! What an image conjured up! Really sensual and cleverly done! Thanks

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Ruby Honeytip 27 October 2012

This is a beautiful moment to write about! True love really does inspire.

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Ray Quesada 16 October 2012

This is a great poem, Red. Why write poems anyway if not for women?

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Red O'Mara

Red O'Mara

Melbourne Australia
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