David Harris

Gold Star - 4,611 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

Her Only Bad Habit Is Me - Poem by David Harris

We walk hand in hand
through our world today.
We will walk that way forever,
if bad habits don’t get in the way.
Now she has only one bad habit,
and that habit is me.

If I do something wrong,
she does not see my failing there.
She would rather go on loving,
the man she chose to care.
Now my bad habit shine like a beckon,
but she does not really care.

So though we wander with love,
through to the sunset somewhere.
I think of how lucky I am,
with everything I see.
So glad she has only one bad habit,
and that habit is me.

14 June 2007

Comments about Her Only Bad Habit Is Me by David Harris

  • Ernestine Northover (6/14/2007 4:13:00 PM)

    As long as ou make a habit of writing such lovely writes then that is two habits she will have to put up with. Strength to you Vera! ! ! Nice write David.
    love and hugs to you both. Ernestine XXX
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  • (6/14/2007 3:53:00 PM)

    i would simply
    like to say that
    if you are her
    only bad habit
    than you've got it wrong,
    and she has none.
    for what could be
    so very wrong
    about one whose words are always strong? ? ?
    and lest one forget
    so filled with love....
    ~~~~~~~~~love, marci.xo
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  • (6/14/2007 6:36:00 AM)

    Love is not so much blind
    But sees the goodness behind
    Our wives do so much display
    The wonder of true love at play.

    Very nicely expressed David
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  • (6/14/2007 6:16:00 AM)

    It`s addictive love, the things you do in the name of love...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, March 11, 2011

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