Her Suicide Note Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Her Suicide Note

Rating: 5.0


I'm truly sorry, please understand,
But life's burden has grown too grand.
In shadows deep, I've lost my way,
Seeking solace in the night's star filled dark blanket.

My heart aches with a heavy weight,
Yet this decision, my ultimate fate.
Know that I've battled, fought in vain,
But now, in peace, I must remain.

Remember me with love, not sorrow,
And cherish our memories, come tomorrow.
For in the afterlife's eternal glow,
I'll find the peace I never could know.


For Sara Teasdale

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

I've given this ***** aka 5 stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

That last comment was sent ('somehow') BEFORE it was finished. I'm foiled aka 'disappointingly unsuccessful AGAIN! ! : ( bri

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

Wow, James, this is a wonderful poem, despite its being bittersweet aka itter and sweet at the same time. Producing or expressing a mixture of pain and pleasure

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

'...the poem was actually first published in her 1915 collection Rivers to the Sea, a full 18 years before her suicide.

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

a favorite line: 'Seeking solace in the night's star filled dark blanket.' I see this is about one of your favorite poets. Sara Teasdale.

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