Hidden Beauty Poem by Vijay Sai R

Hidden Beauty

Rating: 3.8


Around the atlas
I wandered
Indulging in my quest for beauty
Soulful sunrise…
Shimmering sunset…
Sizzling snowfall…
Ravishing rainfall…
Gorgeous glaciers…
Mystery mountains…
Fabulous forests…
Nature at its best
Ever beautiful
I think deep
To find
The most beautiful of them all
No surprise- its a woman!
Hidden beauty
Unveiled danger.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Mason 30 March 2010

true the most beautiful and most delicate of them all a true woman

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Remember, not all snakes are poisonous. Only a few.

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Barbara Leger 01 July 2010

very powerful last line. Like the alliteration too!

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Ted M 25 August 2009

You have taken us on a beauty trip round the world and at the end realised the inevitable. You said it all my friend, you talked about the danger but didn't sense it. Was a lovely trip around the word in a minute for free for that you get.....10+++

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you put me in the Atlas mountain! ! ! it s cold in full summertime! ! ! that s the beauty! ! !

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Anthony Burge 07 April 2013

Agree with Gan, not all snakes are poisonous but those that aren't are constrictors who will squeeze the life out of their prey. A colourful insightful journey through the world of words Vijay. Beware the crouching tiger hidden dragon.

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Hope Cope 23 December 2012

It's a beautiful poem liked the last line a lot

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J.b. Lebuert 19 December 2012

I like this poem, but do not agree with the conclusion that a human can be more beautiful than nature. I do agree about an unveiled danger though. Write on!

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Star Crossed Lady 18 December 2012

very beautiful and true.

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Douglas Scotney 13 November 2012

Now you've got to go looking for examples of danger and work out if woman is most dangerous as well as most beautiful

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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