Thursday, December 3, 2020

High Earning Comments

Rating: 5.0

There silent souls
Slowly goals earn
Where fools can't reach
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. This is the first time I have come across a 'Than-Bauk', a Burmese form of haiku or senryu. 5 Stars***** for this great effort!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 December 2020

don't cry this is complicated u smile all the while lovely boy now fit the syllables and enjoy ThereXXX silent souls//// their silent sole Slowly goals earn................Slowly EARN goal Where fools can't reach.......where fools only reach

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Kostas Lagos 03 December 2020

This is an interesting form of poetry. Excellent poem!

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 December 2020

Very unique style of writing. Thanks for introducing to the new form of writing- Than-Bauk.5****

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