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His Masterpiece

Rating: 5.0
*** One of my Christian themed poems.***

The Potter took a lump of clay and shaped it with His hands.
And when ‘twas finished all did say “’Tis lovelier than all.”
It was all smooth and beautiful, and really very perfect—
And all admired the Potter’s work, from the greatest to the small.

Then one day a Scoffer brought a lump of clay to Him.
He bid Him craft a piece as fine as the work He formed before.
The Potter examined this lump of clay, and found that it was dry.
The Scoffer laughed and said “You cannot craft one as before! ”
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Cheryl Davis Miller 14 September 2009
Great one, He is The Master poet and creator, and I see Him working in you dear girl. c
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Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009
indeed that is the masterpiece...when we can create something beautiful from something that was not.....
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Paul Hansford 07 July 2009
A moral message and (incidentally) a lesson in poetry at the same time. Cut away what is not needed, from your life or from a poem, and the result will be a better poem, or a better person.
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Patti Masterman 05 July 2009
I like this in every way, and the ending is excellent.
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Adi Cox 03 July 2009
Yes, something deep going on with that poem. As we work our art and perfect our craft maybe most importantly we change our hearts. Creativity will us a way. Inspiring.10/10.
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Lady Grace 30 June 2009
a nice piece..and a beautiful one..grace
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Ruth Walters 26 June 2009
What a clever and wonderful tale. You are very talented. Ruthy: -)
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