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On The Melting Of Snow In Spring

Rating: 5.0
As I glanced at the last of the snow melting away,
I noticed the bright spring day;
As snow melts away, better days it brings—
Where spring sun shines, and the sparrow sings!
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 18 August 2009
striking image of melting snow in spring from a fresh out look...I enjoy reading your work, this poem gets a 10
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Rory Hudson 20 April 2009
Nice one. I like the alliteration in the last line. It's a pity you couldn't get a good rhyme for that last line - try working on it.
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Mark R Slaughter 14 April 2009
Another descriptive write - so glad the snow has gone in England that's for sure. Regards Mark
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Adam Sobh 13 April 2009
WOW! SO GOOD THAT I'M SPEECHLESS!
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Robert Howard 11 April 2009
Very fresh and nicely crafted. Your poem has a 'spring' in its step that lifts the spirit.
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Marilyn Lott 09 April 2009
Sweet happy little poem, Paige. Loved it! Keep writing and sharing with us. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
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