His Wait Poem by Deepti Agarwal

His Wait

Rating: 5.0

He thought of her as his mentor
Abyss was his life without her
His eyes followed her everywhere
His heart bled for her to succumb
His vision enveloped her body
there was no room for anybody
for him the stars, the sun, the moon
all shine at her feet
he still waits for her to agree...


Sarvesh Kulkarni 05 November 2008

Nice poem. Simple and sweet. Thanks...

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short and sweet very nice words nicely done. Please read some of my poems when you get the chance especially my poem called ' A DREAM' thank you so much

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very well written in few lines..waiting for acceptance has under tone of romance..lovely

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

wait is an inevitable part of love...but at one point it should end...sooner the better it would be...good expressive write on the subject selected...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 08 November 2008

Nicer than this who can write about a man's pursuit for his beloved, that too by a female gender. done beautifully.

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R.k Das 05 November 2008

the poet knows that he is waiting.. nicely said in verse..

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 05 November 2008

His wait so intense as desert waits for rain, fools waits for sane. But his purpose was to give not to gain. Intense Poem

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