A gold wedding band
Flashes on her ring finger
Too late to back out
Your expressive senryu poem, 'Hitched' is a perfectly and expressively phrased senryu, Sandra, flawless in syllable count. It was a delight to read. You excell in this charming poetic form. Carl.
Wow! What about the second thoughts? She saw in marriage function Hrithik Roshan? ? / Hahaha! Fine senryu
Oops! Too late! She has given away the gift of herself. Another excellent Senryu Sandra! You are the Senryu Queen of Poemhunter. 10 love Karin
Agree with Ted, this senryu can be interpreted in different ways.. :) As always you strike with words, Sandra..10+++ Yelena M.
Hitched, freedom lost! Question is whose? The lady's freedom or the Man's? Love your choice of words. Very brief, but very effective. Nice write.. Enjoyed it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Inevitable situation is well defined in this micro poetry!