Home Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

the last line 'before it rains' caught my mind...i also have a poem with this 'lyrics'..hehe well, what do i think about this....i think that part signifies despair....rain symbolizes life (for the crops) , but on the other hand, it also depicts grief (as tears) .... in this poem, i think 'before it rains' means 'before you die'....hehe...it makes sense though...explore your fate before you [get old and] die....haha

Fantastic work! Keep it up :)

i really enjoyed this poem, it is well written. keep up the good work.

i really love the way said at the end 'before it rains' everyday i trie to skip the pain but its hard

to behonest this is the best poem of them all.. well written <3

i am with Odion in explaining the last phrase..and this is nice a poem i must say...

There is no place like home - true

IT DESERVES THE COMMENT DIRECT STRAIGHT U TAUGHT ME SOMETHING GLAD I AM HERE WILL SEEK TO BE HERE MORE OFTEN ITS A POETS PARADISE OF LEARNING BLESS

Very very well written poem. Also, Well thought of poem. Nice job.

Very creative acrostic poem this is! The last line 'before it rains' caught my mind hard...great phrase! well lets see, what do i think about this..i think that part signifies despair....rain symbolizes life, but on the other hand, it also depicts grief (as tears) in some cases. But in this poem, i think 'before it rains' means 'before you die'....it makes sense! ! explore your fate before you [get old and] die.....: D that's what I like about your poetry, your messages are so clear and clean no matter how twisted the expressions are...very nicely done! it's got a subtle humor too! 10/10.