Home is where you let your hat rest
With all the sweet aroma of love's nest
With passions fulfilling and heart consuming
Does bring the sweetest harmony pleasing
As we all lay beneath our treasured, captive heart
We'll all be laying in beautiful unison from end to start.
Well thought-out and elegantly brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Eva.
A most beautiful and enchanting poem that engages any reader's heart. A little oasis of purity and calm that is warmly welcomed. 10++ and added to my sparkling gems treasure chest. Thank you Eva and take care.
A brilliant couplet with value laden ending two lines! Appreciated and admired.......Top score!
With passions fulfilling and heart consuming Does bring the sweetest harmony pleasing These lines are very poetic and so meaningful dear poetess. tony
Thank you so much Tony for your beauty of a comment on this poem of mine.
Thank you so much Richard, for your thoughtful comment on this written poem of mine. Take care and wishing you well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Test, best, west! With all the aroma of love's nest! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Home sweet home.
Thank you Edward for stopping by and commenting on this poem of mine. A pleasure to see your name on my page.