Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 292 Points (Palencia-Spain)

Honey - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

One step forward,
Stand up, please.
Let me explain need and virtue,
the mystery gravitating around you.
Let me break the distance.

A new voice is a return to hope.
Let´s make doves fly,
and forget routine, survival.
A walk, some confidence,
knots untie,
breathe slowly.

I´ll give you my eyes,
and feel you close.
Words tremble, rush,
so many things to say.

How could you preserve yourself sweet
and keep listening with soft ears?

Talking about honey
we discovered sweet voices
need care

Topic(s) of this poem: care


Comments about Honey by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • Jazib Kamalvi (11/10/2017 7:35:00 PM)


    A nice poetic imagination, Luis. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (7/25/2016 1:00:00 PM)


    Very nicely written, Luis (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/26/2015 2:43:00 PM)


    Very amazing expression shared here with wise motive.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015



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