Honey Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

Honey

Rating: 4.8


One step forward,
Stand up, please.
Let me explain need and virtue,
the mystery gravitating around you.
Let me break the distance.

A new voice is a return to hope.
Let´s make doves fly,
and forget routine, survival.
A walk, some confidence,
knots untie,
breathe slowly.

I´ll give you my eyes,
and feel you close.
Words tremble, rush,
so many things to say.

How could you preserve yourself sweet
and keep listening with soft ears?

Talking about honey
we discovered sweet voices
need care

Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: care
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 10 November 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Luis. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kelly Kurt 25 July 2016

Very nicely written, Luis

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Very amazing expression shared here with wise motive.10

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