Kite Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

Kite

Rating: 5.0


Let´s fly kites.

I´ve been working on one
And I can feel it strong
in my fingers.

I´ve got the right thread,
it´s windy,
it´s a clear winter morning,
and there is no class today.

I will feel your cold hands
While I teach you to let go,
To feel the air,
the blow, the whisper, loneliness.

And then the greyhounds will come and sit
To take a look at us

Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 June 2019

Well done, Luis Gil. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

In loneliness flying kite is definitely marvelous work. Fantastic sharing done definitely.10

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Shah Surja 26 November 2015

beautiful..........poem

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