Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 237 Points (Palencia-Spain)

Kite - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

Let´s fly kites.

I´ve been working on one
And I can feel it strong
in my fingers.

I´ve got the right thread,
it´s windy,
it´s a clear winter morning,
and there is no class today.

I will feel your cold hands
While I teach you to let go,
To feel the air,
the blow, the whisper, loneliness.

And then the greyhounds will come and sit
To take a look at us

Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness


Comments about Kite by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/26/2015 2:39:00 PM)


    In loneliness flying kite is definitely marvelous work. Fantastic sharing done definitely.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Shah Surja (11/26/2015 2:09:00 PM)


    beautiful..........poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015



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