I would not deny
That I could not
Dream or swim
But it was in my dream
Slipped in a deep of ditch
My hands were tied
Legs were not working
I was drowning and drowning
From deep to deeper I felt
Suffocated and strangulated,
As I would not be alive, I would
Be dead, this gave me a cry!
I had had a strong desire to be alive!
A gust of energy in the form of help
Entered in me as if it was dragging me
With a help of a rope of hope
To the shore of life, I jerked in joy
I found myself alive and awake
I gave a big thank and a tight hug
To the rope of hope.
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Fine imagery and excellent way of handling the theme.Nice write :)
..hope is what keeps us going even if we are in the deepest pits of adversity... ..a nice poem..loved it...
the moment we most feel like giving up is when we must continue trying, one way or another, ray of hope will lighten our lives.the message conveyed by your poem is inspiring.however trodden we might get, we can always rise.
A bright poem of optimism. You tried so the rope of hope helped you! Thanks for sharing this nice poem!
Even in a dream.....the beacon of hope is not forgotten! ...nicely put, the rope of hope! Thanx for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When you drown with hopeless day never cry because it rise the water level :) and never act aggressively because it will drown u deeply..when you swim learn from dolphin..it move smooth when you calm..calm down dear when you about to sink and move your hand and leg toward the hope, a ray of light above with descent move you will reach the surface and save..I am glad u found Rope of hope and it's better in emergency! ! ! ! ! :) take care_Unwritten SOul