Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 97,178 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Hopefully You Will Have No Regrets - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I know you have more to do in your life,
Than to agitate and stir up fights.
Criticizing me may appease your appetite,
For the time being.
Until you notice I am not focused,
On your critique...
Or a bittersweetness you may get.
I hope that does not upset?
You'll get over it.
And hopefully you will have no regrets.
I have been accessible to those who pass judgements.
I want those like that to feel...
They too have an importance.
Something that is done that eventually appeals.
If I did not have that to rely on...
I would not make attempts to do my best!
And getting your attention,
Proves I am worthy enough to mention.
And I should relish that with zest and zeal.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 24, 2008

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