How 'bout I die tonight
Just to see how you felt
About good old darn me
Do you feel
I passed the grade
At least C grade
Did I see
The sunshine
In darkness
Did I hear
The sound music
In my deafness
Did I taste
Life's grandness
In distress
Did I touch
Life's beauty
Painted it
You have many great points here to evaluate about self-life if now is the end of it, thoughtful quedtions! Also if u ask me how bout u die tonight? Im not ready for it... Live longer with gracious n happiness because u r one warm fellow :)
Soul, I'm not ready for it either. Thank you for your very positive feedback and your warm wishes. Much appreciated!
Let's hope they remember us for the good stuff! Theresa, thank you so much for reading and commenting. And the 10! Greatly appreciated!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As I finished the last word of this poem, Don MacLean's Starry Starry Night came to mind....I can hear the music. It works well with your words, Richard.
The singer and the song are amongst my all-time favourites. To have this poem associated with that song is a huge compliment for me. Thanks so very much! ! !