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How Come? Good To Bad?

despretly yet so patiently
waiting for the time to pass by
so i sit here and write
my thoughts of mind
i think back of the good old days
how i use to make you smile in any posible way
when we use to horse around and play
is this the price i now have to pay?
precious baby, everyday i pray
you build who i am today, like a piece of clay

the tochy days of valentine's day
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Daniel Tyler 10 April 2006

I'm not very hip, being a rather old-fashioned English chap so I find these raps you write, most clever. You must tell me the secrets of 'rap' poetry- as you clearly demonstrate, it can be very powerful.

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Stuart Mason 15 December 2005

I liked the list of simple, happy memories, and the repeated rhymes and the little bit at the end was a nice addition.

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