How He Made You Cry Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

How He Made You Cry

Rating: 4.6


Did he make it hard....
For you to cry...
Do..
Those tears well up..
To spread..
far out..
Across dawns milky sky..
Does moons...face..
Ride up one wave..and..
Slide back down..
The..other side of dawn..
and when you..
Hear the stormy cries..
deep inside......
and tell me then......
Just how...
he made you cry..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

that's really nice. well written, with sincerity.

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expressionful... very nice.

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Bethany Williams 18 July 2009

This is a sad poem. Its also a great poem.

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

an honest and sincrre querry for a person...emotionally how the person feels... well presented write in poetic diction.....10 (see my poem ' Always ' let me see if it will touch your heart too)

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. . 14 July 2009

The current is dark...in fear she withers...It speaks and I tremble...

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Isaac Maliya 14 July 2009

That's a very nice poem as usual from you! It begs a sincere response from the lass! 10 rated!

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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