How I Feel On The Summer Day Poem by Laurel Vijitha

How I Feel On The Summer Day

Rating: 4.5


On the morning I wake up, I see,
The sun elegantly shining towards me,
And then I realize it's summer today,
'Here comes the summer', I say.

I get up and jump on the bed,
Looking at the sun so red,
Mom comes rushing in,
Holding a spoon from kitchen.

'Mom, it's summer', I say,
Mom smiles and says, 'yes! this is may! '
Now, I am very delightful,
On this day very beautiful,

The clouds passing over,
Hey! the sun is getting covered!
And this is the way,
How I feel on a summer day!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Biljana Popovic 11 September 2013

Nice poem! All the best for You!

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Abhishek Mishra 11 September 2013

Nice poem and great sense of humour: -) keep going...

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Vishal Sharma 05 September 2013

great rhyming scheme great kick start

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Litan Dey 31 August 2013

One Good poem on summer.....loved it

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