How Shall I Remember You Poem by Valerie Dohren

How Shall I Remember You

Rating: 5.0


How shall I remember you
as heavenward I gaze
through clouds of wispy ether
and shimm’ring misty haze.

How shall I recall your smile
through time’s fast moving pace -
remember then forever
your face, your gentle face.

What memories shall stir me
that we should never part –
what thoughts forever cherish
and hold within in my heart.

And shall the things that bound us
together through the years
remain to bring me solace
and ease away my fears.

Are they fixed within my heart
in this gold band I wear -
are they dancing in the wind
yes, shall I find them there.

I pray that they will never
be lost within the shade –
that they will shine forever
not fade, not ever fade.

How shall I remember you -
within the stars that gleam?
as an image in my mind -
a dream, just as a dream …..?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 24 November 2013

So delicately beautiful. With great simplicity you have crafted a poignant and moving tribute for your lost love. You truly inspire me

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Paul Brookes 24 November 2013

Beautiful poem which really moved me. Memories always stay locked in the heart and love never dies. Good write BB : O))

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Smoky Hoss 28 November 2013

What a very beautiful piece. Wonderful words.

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Valsa George 26 November 2013

Yes, that gentle face is etched in your memory! You have only happy memories to relate to him! So he will continue to blaze your path from an unknown corner! .... Absence makes the heart grow fonder... How true! ! A very moving write coming from the inner depth of your heart!

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Lucifera Santez 26 November 2013

a heart breaking, beautiful piece. achingly beautiful. you are one of my favorite poets Val. i love this piece. :)

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Neela Nath Das 02 December 2013

A beautiful poem on sense of loss.Loved.

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Joseph Anderson 30 November 2013

May your memories be joyful and helpful in filling the void you must face-a beauty in tribute

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Terry M 29 November 2013

I wish you the best, and I can tell you that your heart and your mind will remind you from time to time.

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Dinesan Madathil 29 November 2013

As long as your remembrance goes right by making you live ahead you are a winner Valerie. Your fond memories will be passed on to many of us indirectly who hold human relations great above all. Remember him and let the lost love be returning to you in another form to give a solace.

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Kevin Patrick 28 November 2013

These are words that bring tears, though not to me, but to my heart bound in armour, well crafted and told with the pang of yearning, the idea of lost love immortal.

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