A Walk Through Paradise Poem by Valerie Dohren

A Walk Through Paradise

Rating: 4.8

I close my eyes to find a place
In different time and different space
And in imagination find
A cloistered arbour for my mind
Where thought may there be unconfined

Then in my dreams a path I take
As in a trance, yet wide awake,
To see the world with open eyes
Its glist`ning sands and azure skies -
I take a walk through Paradise

Suspended there reflecting deep
Where time is lost, immersed in sleep,
A sleep of ages long since passed
As on the sea of change were cast
All things which then were reckoned fast

Above all earthly cares to soar
Beyond the hurts I there endure
To see a sweet and perfect land
Where sunbeams dance upon my hand -
Where peace and love I understand

And there before my eyes I see
Such beauty that could never be
Revealed in places fixed below
As set before me all aglow
Such wonders ever outward flow

So on I walk beyond the veil
Where joys untold yet e`er prevail
And through the mist of blindness see
Whatever be revealed to me -
In Paradise forever be

George Price 15 August 2013

Absolutely wonderful; I love your sense of purpose and structure. Very enjoyable. Please do keep reading my stuff; your comment and view is much appreciated.

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Piyush Dey 31 August 2014

it is a very thought provoking poem, you wrote it with such beauty. a walk through paradise, lovely write Ms. Valerie.

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Heather Wilkins 29 May 2013

Just to take a walk through pardise If even in dreams is amazing. a good write with lovely images

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Meena Mustafa 06 February 2015

An excellent poem. I could visualize being in a paradise. Just lovely A+++++

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Shaun Cronick 15 June 2020

There is more to say, for I forgot to say thank you. Thank you Valerie. Thank you so very much.

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Shaun Cronick 02 April 2020

Beautiful. What more is there to say.

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Adeeso Adeyemi 28 June 2017

we live in our imagination world that breath freshness to other..love this

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Tom Billsborough 15 May 2016

Subject matter wonderful. but it is your unerring sense of rhythm that brings the beauty of the concepts to sparkling life. Pity we can't give you more than a tenner! where sunbeams dance upon my hand... a delightful line among many. Tom Billsborough

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Valerie Dohren 15 May 2016

Thank you Tom.

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Nick Jordan 03 September 2015

Lovely Poem Flows beautifully and makes for a pleasant journey

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