Humanity Lost Poem by Rini Shibu

Humanity Lost

Rating: 5.0


They smashed and crushed our future
Smoked and burned our hopes to air
Dreams been stripped from hearts
Dark shadows encroached and raped us
Poked and pierced to pool in the blood
What is gained by killing lives
No peace at heart, no tunes to sing
Hungry we are, no food to eat
Running here and there for peace
Begging for love and unity
Wounded we are, no humanity
How to heal and wipe these bleeds
Hear our cry and allow us to live

Monday, February 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity,violence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 22 February 2018

Your poem speaks of the reality in our society today. Excellent. Nuder

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Rini. 22 February 2018

Thanks Nuder..! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 20 February 2018

Humans are able for great achievements but also for great atrocities.Unfortunately most times we choose the second.Great poem!

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks kostas Lagos

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Bipasha D 19 February 2018

I feel the easiest thing for a human begin is to love and care. It's a pity how we have deformed ourselves! ! Thanks for choosing a crucial topic for the poem.

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thanks Bipasha for your feedback..! !

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White Tiger 19 February 2018

Hi Rini. An excellent poem. Total truth. It's shameful of what has become of our society. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thank you so much Charlie for visiting

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

Running here and there for peace Begging for love and unity Wounded we are, no humanity....it is a clear picture of present society. Dear Rini you have so nicely and touchingly inscribed this poem that any reader will like it.

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thank You so much Kumar for your wonderful comment..! ! !

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